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We have been friends for quite some time
The friendliness and secrets we shared worth more than a dime
Before I knew of this all
Felt like we where unstoppable and could stand tall
However since the events of a recent while
Now together we can hardly smile

I know too much about you
I can read your plans, your mutiny and attacks I see right through
For once we were friends
However now we both defends
The power and existence of two opposing teams
To think of us as friends again, seems only justifiable in make believe dreams

The understanding, friendly feelings we had
Have diminished, tarnished a million times a tad
I do not hate you,
For once we were two
Beings of a sharing belief
However now that I see who you are really are makes my decision more of a relief

For I will still nod a greeting
However will not give you the chance of a meeting
For you chose your path
Our friendship is now in half
With my emotions towards you
Are not hatred, regretful or new

However just so you know
If i fight a battle and your face is at show
Upon the walls of my opposing foe
With a shield guilded and sword at go
You will not gain saviour nor mercy from my part
I will personally have more than your friendship torn apart

You will be just another one
Who feels the attack of what our armies have done
Here on the battlefield I bid you farewell
I will be the one to live and tell

For you chose your path
Now it is time for you to suffer your fateful aftermath.
©2008-2009 ~M-a-l-a-n-t-i-a
:iconm-a-l-a-n-t-i-a:

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I have tried for some time to put these thoughts into what I felt was a thorough statement . I feel I have finally achieved this with this poem, tell me what you think?

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:iconnetherianshrina:
It is a rather curious piece of literature that you have written here. I would like to know of whom you specify this poem towards. Would be rather interesting. Also seems like time for me to grab my notebook.
:iconm-a-l-a-n-t-i-a:
Well it isnt specified to someone in particular more or less for anyone who is a friend and betrays... Someone asked me the question what would i do if ... was fighting a battle against me. From then on i was intrigued to write a piece about what i would do. The events have not occured persay but if they did occur this is what I would do/ say.

What do you think of it? Do you like it ?

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